Author's commentsorry for the sounds,had bit of a problem,but anyways,i hope you enjoy.
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By: Blizz, Impression: Okay, Score: 6
Posted 6 months ago
To me, the animation seemed kind of dull. The expressions were good, and so were
the figures. However, I disliked the fact that you used so many tweens. If there
was more actual animation, it would be a lot better, in my opinion. The main
things you need to work on, I believe, are getting rid of wobbles and resizing.
You have a lot of potential, I think. Put it to good use!
By: supperbas, Impression: Lame, Score: 3
Posted 6 months ago
I might be a bit harsh here but, the drawing of the characters was okay
But they barely changed expressions, and it was basically using a tween to make
them move
so yeah that really makes the overall rating drop in free fall speed :P
I do mis the fact that there is almost no sound!, so yeah I think you can
improve on quite some aspects
I like the characters, but yeah there was too little variety in my opinion
By: killerkb, Impression: Decent, Score: 5
Posted 6 months ago
Pretty decent.
I think your backgrounds would be better without the outline's though.
And most of it felt a bit 'lazy', since there wasn't allot of actual 'animation'
going on.
But yeah, a good start maybe, for something bigger.