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By: Invert, Impression: Dumb, Score: 2
Posted 8 months ago
No.
Not feeling anything good in this animation, the BACKGROUND was not good, the
sticks you provided us with had huge dinosaur feet and the movements/positioning
could also use A LOT of work.
By: Dark-M, Impression: Risky, Score: 4
Posted 8 months ago
Woah!
Need to work on your fluidity, mainly. Other than that, I could see it wasn't
really going anywhere and it was totally retarded as you stated. Hm. Still
creative and I guess it was decent with the inventory, but try to master
movements and parkour before you bring in items like bombs and spears. Once you
master the basic of physics, you will understand how it applies to everything
you animate.
I am giving you a 4 in good taste, which I think is deserving considering the
quality of this animation, I hope you agree. You need to aim higher and improve
your standards. Good luck with your further animations and remember to practice
animating movements and physics.
By: Emile, Impression: Entertaining, Score: 6
Posted 8 months ago
Hahah I loved it. Made me laugh, it was original and ideas were good but as
other said, you need to improve your animation skills! :)
By: Matt, Impression: Boring, Score: 4
Posted 8 months ago
A definite improvement needed. The movements were off, and physics weren't as
good as they could be, even if you aren't using flash. Although if I'm honest
the explosion wasn't to shabby, better than some flash ones I've seen.
By: supperbas, Impression: Crap, Score: 4
Posted 8 months ago
Well animation wise to use your own language it's 'crap' (no offense)
You can really improve on the movements, make it more smooth or actually try to
work on the basic movements I'm sure if you try to improve those it will
definitely make the animation much better.
What I did like however was the humor, and the 'totally retarded' behavior of
the stick and of course the sounds xD
By: Kieran., Impression: Entertaining, Score: 7
Posted 8 months ago
I thought the ideas were good, but the animation was lacking a bit. Keep going!