Not bad! The BG is quite nice, although the shading could use some work. Make
the lines even, a shadow is silloutted evenly from the object casting it. Wobbly
and screwed up shadows that don't corrospond with the object look worse than no
shadow.
Also, don't know what you are smoking, but the ground isnt purple. If you plan
on making a realistic background, like you have here with the sun, sky,
mountains... you dont contrast the foreground in purple. Period. It looks
horrible. By all means, go for the abstract background, but dont ever mix
realism and abstract. It makes you look like you have down syndrome and cant
tell the difference.
6/10, it wasnt really an anim, I know, but it still wasnt crash hot.
By: Kieran., Impression: Cool, Score: 5
Posted 3 years ago
Like the background and the bird animation. The interactivity of moving it
around was also pretty cool.
By: Matt, Impression: Decent, Score: 3
Posted 3 years ago
Not incredible, a little bland, but add an awesome animation on the top and it
should be awesome C:
By: Zackie, Impression: Dull, Score: 5
Posted 3 years ago
SB already said much of what i needed to say.
Basically, it's look too plain and simple for my liking. Nothing impressive yet.
But considering that i haven't seen you make anything is like months. This is a
rather good start.
By: supperbas, Impression: Short, Score: 7
Posted 3 years ago
Looks good tbh!
some C&C
The sky looks a bit plain, you want want to add some clouds to it!
And for the purple underground the pink shade looks a bit odd, but it might be
just me.
Basically for the mountain I have the same remark as for the sky they look a bit
plain but maybe that was part of the plan
The interactive bird is pretty cool :P, I spotted one 'error' if leave the frame
and go back into the frame the bird keeps moving into one direction which is
kinda weird!