The storyline was decent, but your animation needs work.
Watch some tutorials, im sure you'l find alot.
heres what you should work on.
Easing
Smoothing
and maybe watch some tutorials on reactions etc. so you can get some realistic moves.

By the way, when you use line style, you should hold 'ctrl' and cliek then drag a line to give it a curve, this will make your stick look a little bettr ;3

-Plazmah

The storyline seems to be a little unclear. So...did the main char resurrected or sth?

May not be the best animation but it's the best from you since. Something different from a typical stick fight. Hopefully, you can re-do the animation and touch-up more on the storyline and animation. That would be GREAT!

 Author's response 

Yea i was thinking maybe a voice over and just make it a trailer. Oooor re type the story of underling text version but i cba looking up all the dates n stuff.
Lol it was historically accurate when i made it. eg. the father is killed in 1189. In the riots of Norfolk...which actually happend lol. The 3rd crusades were actually between 1190-92, the swords used are modelled on the swords of the english crusaders and the symatir of the turks also Underling was killed in 1199 the same battle in which Richard the Lionheart was wounded and by a crossbow bolt, then died.
You get the idea.

Nice animation!

Yeah I thought it was cool, but I can understand why the old one got blamed though.
However I like the story line, I thought you also had a full written story on this guy, but I could be wrong

Anyways, I thought it was cool =]

 Author's response 

Yea i did but it was on V2 SB and it got deleted along with the site :(

Ahah i remember this well
I thought the story line was a little good, but the short scenes needed some work, eg movements and the events that happen.
Like, in the Crusades he just killed one guy and then stood there, if you know what i mean.
Anyway, still pretty good :)

 Author's response 

Yea, it wasnt meant to be a full anim just sorta a visual image to go with the story. Maybe be able to do more sometime.

I thought the storyline, effects and music were all good.

Work needs to be done on movements etc....

But nice work!

 Author's response 

Lol thanks man, Ye i intend to eventually re do the entire thing anim wise.