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By: supperbas, Impression: Okay, Score: 5
Posted 2 years ago


Yeah I also really like the Background!

As for the animation, the sword might have been a bit too big for the sticks
I would also make the sticks a bit taller, now they are so tiny

I think the movements looked okay, but I might not be the best person to say if it's good or bad

Nevertheless I thought this test ways 'okay' =] keep up the good work!
By: Kingsmash, Impression: Cool, Score: 8
Posted 2 years ago


The BG is pretty cool.All i got to say is work on fluidness and this will be awesome.
By: Kieran., Impression: Decent, Score: 5
Posted 2 years ago


Don't get downhearted. It was pretty good. Just learn from the crit and you'll get better in no time.

I like the background btw!
By: Invert, Impression: Dull, Score: 4
Posted 2 years ago


To be honest I did not find the movements "good" at all matt, they are choppy and wobbly, the dodge was decent, just work on easing but it looks like you were not using onion skin from my point of view.
By: Zackie, Impression: Short, Score: 4
Posted 2 years ago


A very very simple and short test. The bg was sketch and good but for the animation itself. It's like you're not even putting much effort into it. And worst of all, you submitted an unfinished entry. What a kill-joy. Other than decent movements, there's nothing else much to discuss about.

Try again! 4/10
By: Matt, Impression: Good, Score: 5
Posted 2 years ago


It was alright, movements looked a little off and the BG was sketchy (obviously). Ill give a 5 for good movements all round but extremely short.
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