| Kingsmash |
Posted: 11-02-10' (2 years ago)
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http://www.supperbas.com/uploader/view/124/
http://www.supperbas.com/uploader/view/123/ LAE!!!! Lae!!! Look At Et!! -------------------- my name is Kingsmash and i will be THE KING | |
| Underling |
Posted: 11-02-10' (2 years ago)
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Nice stuff man, the first one was way to fast though. Slow it down an little and the hand raise at the end was sudden. Nice smooth movements though :).
2nd was much better, i liked the low grav bit. Slower and easier to watch. Simple idea and good. Sounds need a bit of work other than that good job! -------------------- The ship's hung in the air in much the same way that bricks don't. | |
| killerkb |
Posted: 13-02-10' (2 years ago)
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Nice man. Pretty solid style you got going here.
First one was indeed way to fast, in my eyes. Second anim was 'aight'. Though I really dislike the 'no arms' thing. But thats a personal thing I guess. Looking forward to see a 'long' kind of anim from you though. -------------------- Animator / Voice Actor | |
| supperbas |
Posted: 19-02-10' (2 years ago)
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Looks good!, I would however work on the movements a bit in the first anim, the way the guy on the left catches the ball and holds it high up in the air looks a bit 'fast' and 'straight' so I would change that
As for the second anim, I really like your 'original' style =] haven't seen that for a while looks good and smooth really keep up the good work Kingsmash! -------------------- SupperBas[dot]Com - site of power - | |
| Novatris |
Posted: 06-10-11' (4 months ago)
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Looks good alright. tho i still have some criticism.
In the first animation the guy who passed the ball first, stayed in a strange fetal position. also work on your easing. it wasn't bad tho. the second animation was much better. it was more flowing and smooth, but the jumps were too fast.work on your "airtiming". and arms would have been a nice touch to it. ~Teemu | |
