| Trunkz |
Posted: 31-01-10' (1 month ago)
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Some new anims and tests:
Random newstyle: http://filebox.me/view/0v7cw7hi4 Sword with newstyle: http://filebox.me/view/3j3gptbdi Latest newstyle: http://www.truploader.com/view/850384 Terrible WIP FB: http://filebox.me/view/iavpte9tb Flippy: http://filebox.me/view/bdcm0f4t7 Sparklestick (TO BE CONTINUED): http://filebox.me/view/91qpmp3yt Thanks and enjoy. (Btw I know I suck.) ((And I'll make a Bday anim)) ((( I promise...))) Not... -------------------- I can't think of anything snappy to say as of the moment so I'm leaving this till I think o' summat. ![]() | |
| Matt |
Posted: 01-02-10' (1 month ago)
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Ok, first, Hey Trunkz! Ok, to the crits >:3
Random Newstyle: Wasn't too crazy about the thing you did with his head when he moved, but that might just be your style. The fast quick movements were cool, the movements were nice, the easing was good, but one thing is... well, look at the first frame of the animation, and then the last. Some serious resizing issues with his head and body. He looks like a normal stick at the beginning, then by the end he looks like that guy with the rugby ball head who tried to open a gate (cookie for reference). Other than that, it was pretty cool, try to make a combo with another stick with exaggerated movements, it might look good. Sword With Newstyle Ah, I liked this, nice easing at the tip of the jump, nice sword (is it yours?). Although near the beginning when he's anticipating, the stops for about half a second, and THEN jumps. It makes it look unrealistic, or that might just be what you're trying to get at. I don't know :D Other than that there's nothing to crit. I quite like that style of stick. It's a very short animation is just a small tidbit :3 Lastest Newstyle Lmao. I prefer this newstyle (Although it seems to just be the other one with a thicker brush size), but the movements were very slow. It might just be me but I'm not toooo fond of that kind of movement. Just my opinion. What did he do at the beginning? He seemed to jolt his head up and Prawn fluid went everywhere (Another cookie for reference). The kick looked very unrealistic because it lasted so long D: Although, I do applaud you for doing something that slow and having practically no wobble whatsoever. Terrible WIP FB Didn't quite... get this one. Lol. Again like Latest Newstyle, absolutely no wobble which is fantastic. It's extremely short so there's not much to crit... onto the next one. Flippy This one I reeaaalllly liked. The bounce/dead at the end looked VERY cartoon-realistic. The easing was almost perfect, although im not too fond of the black lines from his head, although that may just be me again. Also the background wasn't amazing - lol. This one's very good though, the way you did it (im not sure how) made me chuckle a little bit. CHUCKLE. I don't CHUCKLE, I'm MANLY. MANLY MEN do not chuckle. Sparklestick Definately my favourite from them all. Great easing and anticipation, the particles from the wand were top-notch, and the whole idea was good. You're improving all the time Trunkz, you'll be up there with the greats in no time :D By the way, in your P.S, what's up with the (PS I KNOW I SUCK). No, you don't. You... haha, you really don't. You've been to SFDT right? THOSE people suck. The vast majority cant animate a guy falling into a hole (F***ML hole is my example). You can animate a guy flying around the screen with a wand making sparkly shit. You're better than you think - either that or you're looking for attention ;) -------------------- When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix Need any art for an animation or game? Pm me! | |
| Trunkz |
Posted: 01-02-10' (1 month ago)
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Hey :3 And just ahead thanks for the epic crits :>
Random Newstyle: Yeah I'm aware of the head rofl. That was one of the first things I noticed watching it obviously but that's probably because I prefer animating smaller sticks and I find it harder to animate longer sticks really. Also the head trail thing did go a little bad and took ages, so I probably wont do that much but it was cool. :P Sword With Newstyle: Thanks :3. Yeah I tried my best easing with this as I never really was good with weapons. It is my sword and to be honest I do that pause in most anims D:. Yeah it was short but I just got bored, I never really do weapons but I am doing sparklestick :D. Also I added trails and a temp. enemy to that but posted the wrong link D: - http://filebox.me/view/zxysu1xsn Latest Newstyle: It was the same style rofl, I was just experimenting with exactly that redraw head-ish style and thin sticks, this was the latest and my fave. I realise I did it slow but with this style I try to ultra ease and anticipate, and I sorta messed this up with double-frames in which I kept the body and redrew legs. It is unrealistic rofl, and thanks 'bout the wobble :3. Terrible WIP FB: Told'ja it was terrible and WIP. Btw the red is the draft and the blue is more fleshed (I'll prolly do a black finished version). And yes very short, got bored rofl. Flippy: Thanks mang :3. I went for a cartoon style and I'm prouf o' that. Thanks about the easing, and the lines were cool IMO, but I suppose mine look strange x3. Also I had made about 3 anims that day and just wanted to do that style quickly so I didn't spend long on a bg. LOL YOU CHUCKLED. Sparklestick: My fave too :D, and I will continue that. Thanks alot mang :D I spent ages on that and it's a hard piece of work. (Giggety) By the way YES I DO SUCK. Rofl, in my opinion anyways. And no I haven't seen SFDT rofl. You think I think? LOL. I will make a Valentines Day AND Bday anim. I promise. Maybe. -------------------- I can't think of anything snappy to say as of the moment so I'm leaving this till I think o' summat. ![]() | |
| Kieran. |
Posted: 01-02-10' (1 month ago)
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Uhm, ohai trunkz <3
*insert long crit that has already been mentioned here* But other than that, they are extremely awesome! I LOVE THEM <3 Keep animating bruder. -------------------- "The only place where success comes before work is in the dictionary." | |
| F4Zero |
Posted: 03-02-10' (1 month ago)
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Your movements are too jerky, they don't flow and aren't natural. It likes after each attack, "he" takes a slit second to think about what he wants to do next, that's not how it should be. "He" should already have already thought about what attacks he wants to do, therefore the movements naturally flow. Do you kind of understand what I'm saying? Anyway, that's the main problem; fix that up and it'll look great.
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| Kingsmash |
Posted: 07-02-10' (1 month ago)
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there isnt much too say except the fact that you have a hugh resizeing problem in all of your anims.
-------------------- my name is Kingsmash and i will be THE KING | |