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Tonney
Posted: 12-01-10' (2 years ago)
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So, I thought I'd do some math for a change. This forum has a music section. I make -music-, if you can call it that. See where I'm going with this? Yeah, I thought I'd make a song about the music section.

No, not really. I'll just post some of my stuff here, starting with just one song. Just ONE. Not my best, not my worst, and definitely not good. Just that ONE song that i thought would make it onto NG audio. Really though I'm just slapping it on here, to get the forum running, and if someone knows their way around Fruity Loops, or is a musical genius, feel free to criticise me, I'm open to that.

- Absolution
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/302354

Okay, Since you guys liked that, i'll slap another one up here. I think you're lying, though. This one's actually older, and a shitload longer.

- Frozen Tower
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/303604


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supperbas
Posted: 12-01-10' (2 years ago)
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Sounds good Tonney,

Besides that I really like trance, the beginning was just good. But how you make the change somewhere halfway the song, hehe really nice!!
The only C&C I could give you is that the sound you use somewhere half way sounds a bit too 'sharp', and it's getting a little chaotic.
Also that loop I'm talking about just suddenly ends somewhere around 02:34 just like *poof* it's gone, I would change that.

But I've to say, it sounds rather well :D!

Keep it up!


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killerkb
Posted: 12-01-10' (2 years ago)
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Woah, pretty good man.
You've got some talent. :]

Only thing I'd change, is a louder 'bassline'. It felt as if there was hardly any bass' at all.
Plus, the ending was a real downside. How you suddenly went faster, then slower and then suddenly you stop.
Kinda' ruined it.

But other than that, I quite like it.


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Kieran.
Posted: 12-01-10' (2 years ago)
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I really like it, I was listening to it for ages.

Other than that complicated stuff SB and KKB have already told you, I think its great!


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Tonney
Posted: 12-01-10' (2 years ago)
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Bleh, it's like with absolutely all of my stuff. Art, i get lazy in the end and loose interest. Flash? I've never completed a single animation that's longer than a minute. maybe not even that. Music? Yeah. Of about 50 things that you could call "Songs" two are actually complete. I just loose interest, that's something I'd like to fix about myself. But, thanks for the comments, i hope for more, though. Next time i make a song I've got quite a few things to worry about, then. : D

Oh, also, about the bass, i hate bass that has another sound to it, like every kick you hear in every song. I want my songs to sound good without it, and i'm working towards that, but, not coming out well i guess. : D. I'll just kick it up a little next time, and we'll see how that sounds.


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Posted: 13-01-10' (2 years ago)
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Well...i know little about how to compose songs and musics but i really, really like. It's one of those musics that i can listen to forever. It's so addictive. I just hated the last part, a sudden stop.

0.00 to 1.20 was my favorite part so far.

Hope to hear more from you soon.


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Tonney
Posted: 13-01-10' (2 years ago)
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Well, i hit another one up.


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Posted: 13-01-10' (2 years ago)
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damn you and your boredom. I really like your music man, there are various technical issues but thats probably just due to lack of practice and SB n KB already pointed them out. wish i could find some of your stuff man. Some of them were awesome.


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Posted: 15-01-10' (2 years ago)
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Meh, I like the beginning and totally disliked when it got faster :\

I didn't like the second one.


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supperbas
Posted: 15-01-10' (2 years ago)
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Wow I really like that last song Tonney!!

There is not really that much I could comment about, because I actually like it the way it is :D
Sounds like a trance song should sound like!
Good job=]


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Kieran.
Posted: 15-01-10' (2 years ago)
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I actually loved the last one, except I didn't listen on too much cause I thought It was a bit long.

Nice work!


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